I really liked these lines:

Turn around,

I’m still here!

How could you miss me?

I’m not crystal clear.

Keep up the good work! :D

I liked this poem a lot. It feels like I wrote it, lol.

I thought the ending was a little unexpected, I don't know why though.

I liked it. Oh, and you have a typo with this line: 'YetI cannot stop,'.

The poem was sorta confusing and despairing.

Hmm...an interesting way too look at it. I didn't like this line: 'Your crimson stained silks,' I don't really know why...I think it just doesn't seem to fit in with the lines around it.

Oh, I like how it starts off and then ends unexpectedly.

I liked it. You have a good choice of words.

Great poem. I was never a fan of using the same rhyming words more than twice but you did a great job of using them throughout the whole poem!

...?...*clicks the next chapter button*

i think this has a strong meaning to you at least, and that comes through even before i read the memo at the end. i wish i had time to read all your poems tonight lol

dont feel you failed, no one can truly put His love into words. I love this poem, i wish i could say im the same but my sin came while i knew Him.

ooh thats cute! and yet in a way depressing and hopeful, its odd.

as a fan of the medieval, i like this simple verse :)

I don't have time to read all these poems now but I like your writing and I will at some point (so I'm adding this to my story alert list). It reminds me of the same style I wrote in a poem called "girl in black" where I repeated the phrase and did stanzas like this...I'm going to put it up so you can see 'cause it's funny how much they're the same in style!