|Reviews for fresh from the blender|
| all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i love it in general, but i think it was the format/italics/bolds that really did it for me.
i love how nothing is capitalized. capitalization in poetry for the sake of grammar kind of ruins it for me. except i'm not one to talk, since i do that a lot. eh.
"..back to your/new/girlfriend/who i happen to know well..."
i love everything after that.
the emotion is amazing. vindictive and angry.
| Flies chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Reminds me of villians in superhero comics-how they always try to get the last laugh. I love the title (I'm obsessed with blenders) and the way it's written, it's really fun, again, in a sadistic way.
| David-Mole chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
hahaha, I remember seeing this somewhere lol. Just read your others, and they're just as good. You're a very unique poet, incase I didn't tell you that before. Great stuff
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
i love the anger in this, and the captivating title. nice work!
| insomnia in dreamland chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
i loved this, formatting at all. i like the way you wrote it with bold italicized and underlined letters. i love the line about a heart being dropped into a blender. it reminded me of a song i heard once. but anyway, back to the topic, i loved that line. i could just picture a heart being dropped into a blender and god... your poem was just so wonderful.