| Reviews for The Piper and the Doll |
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   devil's-fav-angel chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 you are evil. i'm laughing so hard it hurts. innocent my ... |
| Hydie chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 Haha! This was hilarious! Poor, poor Piper. Man, do WANT to make her friends jealous? |
| Emeraldied chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 NO! WHY, WHY, WHY must you forever torment me? *crying hysterically on the floor* Sniff, sniff. :( Meany :P |
| Emeraldied chapter 3 . 1/21/2006 LOl. Yepyep! I'm back. You really have a nack for keeping me on the edge of my seat don't you? I love it. Can't wait to read what happens next, but I seriously want to see when the other girls see how HOT Ariel is. :P That will most positively be something worth waiting for. Again, another great chapter and can't wait for you to update. |
| PrincessEmmeh chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 Ooh, that was VERY evil, haha. And I'd love to hop in the shower with him.. _ Haha :] |
| Mi chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 LMAO This story is soo great! lol Poor Piper she should really stop disapointing Ariel, if you know what I mean ::wink wink:: lol..Anyway keep up the fab job, and please update soon! |
| CTRL chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 haha, gosh this story is good. funny, too D ariel just seems so adorable! well update soon! |
| gbheart chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 cool story Ariel sounds so sweet but I don't think he's all that innocent as he seems |
| howareyou chapter 2 . 1/21/2006 In your first chapter, you wrote "The doll had golden hair and a left green eye and a left blue eye." While it is possible to have varicolored eyes, I don't think you intended to give the two colors of his left eye and nothing of his right. I didn't notice it at first, but then I scrolled up and realized something looked odd about that sentence. Also, in Chapter 2, you wrote "...on my bed… OMG! I did not just think..." I think it's slightly annoying to see "OMG" inside a story; it looks unprofessional to me, because, usually, authors tend to write out abbreviations like that. Aside from that and a few other minor errors, you've written a decent story so far. Nice job. Keep it up. :) |
| mookyjoo chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 Hey this story is so cool! Ariel sounds so ... haha innocent! keep it up! i really wanna read more! cheers! |
| Quicha75 chapter 4 . 1/21/2006 This story is very interesting and I have enjoyed reading every chapter |
| TaurusGirl7 chapter 3 . 1/20/2006 oh some suspense... lolz nice chapter update soon! |
| Cherise chapter 3 . 1/20/2006 He's too cute! (Ariel) He's not really like a doll, but like a boyfriend, the perfect boyfriend, who has amnesia of all worldly things. Hahaha. |
| Esquirella chapter 3 . 1/20/2006 No worries for droning on. I can relate. In one of my co-written stories, people are telling me (and my co-writer, jma) that we copied the idea of cat-men from someone else. There are lots of stories about cat-people out there, I'm sure. But neither of us recalls one like ours. Anyway, about this chapter. So, that's the villain, eh? He seems pretty ominous to me. Good job on the intro to him. And Theo's gay? Cool! LOL! |
| Raven of Ice chapter 3 . 1/20/2006 Great, again! That explains more. Cant wait to see what happens |