Reviews for The Piper and the Doll |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cool story update soon! |
![]() ![]() YAYAYAYAYA YOU UPDATED ...ahem i loved the ending well written and well emotion packed chapter i hope you update soon again |
![]() ![]() OMG YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE! THAT WAS SUCH AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER! I LOVE THIS STORY- PLZ WRITE MORE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally! I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() um, couldnt she just use her flute to heal ariel? u know, somehow get the dudes distracted then heal him then woo! everyone is happy, cept the dudes...but yh :) so, yh, that was FAB! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is she scared of dolls? I still dont really know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I used to be scared of dolls too. This story's cool though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is the mistake that ariel was created to have feelings of love hate ect.? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read all of your story and I loved it. I wish they would kiss... and if you kill Ariel then I'll be extremely mad. Not that I could obviously do anything but still. Keep going I loved it... honest to goodness I |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was SO GOOD. I LOVED IT! I LOVE..LOVE..LOVE..LOVE IT. Wow, that was an awesome story. Please, PLEASE write more. I will be |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh nice one. leave a cliff hanger for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ariel is so cute and innocent it's almost sad to read this story. i am so weird. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, i like reviewed this chapter last night and it didn't work! Oh well. Anyways, this is a GREAT story. It's very unique, original and refreshing! I love Ariel! AW! I felt so sad that he REALLY does love Piper but she thinks that he's not capable of loving her because he's a doll... but he does. *tear* So sad. SHe should just give in! Lol, anyways, I'm curious to see what happened at the end with the mirror and the shadow. I noticed that you haven't updated this in awhile and am becoming worried. Please PLEASE contine this! It's very AWESOME and I HAVE to know what'll happen next! lol. I also can't wait to see the ROMANCE blossom between the two, hopefully. One more thing. I just started writing a new story here and although it's not my first attempt at writing, i'm still relativelly new to it. SO I was wondering if you could please check my story out and tell me what you think! I would appreciate it a lot :) Update Soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! Like what Piper said, what happened there? Hehe... and darn! I haven't been updated for the past 2 weeks! Nakakainis naman noh? Hehe... But anyways Ariel isn't being that oh-so-innocent boy anymore! He's becoming...like Jared! Hehe! Dapat magta-type ako ng adjectives but may mental block ako ngayon eh so pasensya na! Anyways... always supporting you! Hannah |
![]() ![]() hehe...I couldn't stop myself from reading this chapter... :P can't get enough out of it , just simply love Ariel and wanna know his thoughts about Piper... Aw...wish he was mine! |