Reviews for The Piper and the Doll |
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![]() ![]() Wow, cool chapter. Action mode huh? why the enemies want to leave marks on Piper or Ariel? Kinda weird... but I think u have something in mind for the part. I want the innocent Ariel...sobs... Don't transform him into something evil. I can't stand the change... :P Being too emotional for Ariel. :P Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Aw...Ariel! :P still can't get myself over him ; hope u don't mind that I got perky when it comes to him :D anyway, I love this chapter, ariel is getting more and more mature (another way of saying not too innocent) anymore X3 but it's good sign for both of them, Ariel and Piper. I'm looking forward to the coming chapter! Gambatte ne! |
![]() ![]() Ah! So cute! Ariel! :P can't hold my excitement when it comes to him! So innocent yet so...sigh... haha, I wonder what will happen if he read that kama sutra... Anyway, this chapter is great! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you and your cliffhangers, gah. lol, i love this story though, and i had a question but i forgot, it'll come back to me though, dont worry, lol. can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Ariel going to get his powers back? Anyways, great chapter. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I see it again! The sweet Ariel and his LOVE for Piper! TT,TT soo sad! I dip my insanity in a pool of tears! Very beautiful! Oh yeah, is Blanche the witch person? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing and so wonderfully creative that I can't help feeling awed by your talent. Gosh, I want to read more because this is so good! Please update soon, I'm 'dying' to know what will happen next! I want to say please update soon again, but I know you have a busy life and other things to do, so no pressure, but don't forget your readers and all those reviews you're getting ) ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope she didn't take Ariel's powers away for good... |
![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story rocks, I think I'm already in love with Ariel. Maybe even Jared. Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() I adore your story! It's so original, funny, and some what exciting. You deffinitly know how to keep your readers intertained. Keep up the awsome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a mirror? wow, lucky them...or maybe not so lucky depending on who produced the mirror. hmm, who IS the freaky guy? lol, poor Piper, getting all confused, is Ariel really changing that much? guess so...aww, update soon! - |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WANT HER TO JUST GIVE IN! Poor Ariel... -sniff- |
![]() ![]() gasp- ariel already knows some dirty stuff. aww, _ |
![]() ![]() aw... i feel sorry for her and ariel...change subject...is blanche goinig to forgive piiper? |