Reviews for The Piper and the Doll |
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![]() ![]() Greta! plz continue! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, he's 'jealous', XD. What an adorable wittle-/makes baby noises. Wo, and another chapter! Keep up the cool beans. xP |
![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's beautiful! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wai! I love this! It's so adorable and full of magic! I lOVE magic! And is this based on anything? Anyhow, I LOVE THIS! It's amazingly artistic and has good grammar! (Un-like my work...)AMAZING JOB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I play the flute! yay! nva read a story with anyone who plays the flute in it! lol! wow, this story is soo good! carry on please nd update soon! its brill! |
![]() ![]() i really really like ur stories..and i hate to ask this...and i normally dont...but can u plea please please update...i really wanna noe whats gonna happen with Ariel and Piper...and btw ..god i wish Ariel was real..how kool would that be? i mean hes gorgeous, sweet and tough...its the perfect combo..lol.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter. Ariel's confusion at school makes sense and gives the reader a laugh. :) Thanks for finally updating this! |
![]() ![]() Aw...can't resist it! I love to read more about it! Kind of addicted to your stories... T_T... Don't torture me! Your chapters are awesome! Keep up the good work! Wish I have Ariel's ability to study... |
![]() ![]() Poor Piper but yet... she's lucky :PHaha. Ariel's so cute and innocent! |
![]() ![]() Aww... Ariel is so caring... I wish he is mine... sobs... Hehe. I like this chapter. |
![]() ![]() AHh...so cute! Adorable Ariel . Cool chapter you got here! |
![]() ![]() Awesome opening! It's totally cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story update soon;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() gosh... ur story is totally cute! i love it. please update asap! please, pretty please... can't wait for the next chap. btw i thought ariel is so cute. his child-like innocence is totally adorable. n piper is cute too what with her trying to protect him _ |