Reviews for The greatest gift
pyraverne chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
*cry* SO BEAUTIFUL! now on my favs... hello fellow christian, how r u?... Thanks for the review, please come back for more poems! -Pyra
Evul Buddha chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
I really like the way the poem flows through and the small chours you put in, really makes the poem work well, Keep up the good work

HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
I love how you repeat through out the poem

*why would you give that up for me?*

It gave the poem such deep emotion. I like.

He Loves You!God Bless,HoldinOn2Him
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
I love your poems~ :D
Rebekah Lynn chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Yay! Good job.
cygnus olor chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
"The greatest gift that could set you free

Why would you give that up for me?"

i love this line... repeating it gives more drama... more meaning...

i think you're gonna be in my A list too :)

* ner *
SoulPoet chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I like the repetitive thought about how could you give that up for me... and i love how you tied in your Religion into it...

He did make the greatest sacrifice for us... but it shows he loves us with all his heart and wants us to live on doing the right thing...

Keep up the awesome work!
Lovejoy chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I like this poem. I often find religious poems too blind and bias, or with false pretenses but this was good and expressed a deep love for the ransom sacrifice! With the exception of one or two lines this poem was excellent. Good work!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
lovely and quite spiritual~ good work

keep writing!
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
JC would be proud...OR filled with hatred
amavian chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
I’ve always found it interesting to see who the Christ was more as a human then as a son of God. It’s the humanity of his personage that makes me love him.