Reviews for fields of yellow flowers
Flies chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
You know, the use of the medium refrence-crayons, makes the poem seem to be talking to a child. The butter/toast thing backs it up, too. Like neglecting parents who want nothing to do with their ill-concieved child. Sort of estrange, but honest in a twisted way.
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
I sense hatred. Maybe that's just me. (I don't mean to offend you) But this poem is quite special. It's really descriptive and I like the punctuation. And there is emphasis which is also good. There's a bit on senses too. That's good. Great job!