This kinda reminds me of Romeo and Juliet.. only.. you're no Romeo. Don't take that as an offense! I swear: you not being Romeo is a good thing... I mean honestly.. he did everything tersly and just on the moment. Like.. he married Juliet without a second thought after they JUST met and he knew that they couldn't BE together.. but he did it anyways. O and not to mention if he just WAITED for Friar Lawrence to EXPLAIN what was up with Juliet then he wouldn't have played "hero" and gone back to Verona EVEN THOUGH HE WAS EXILED. And then kill himself! He kisses her and goes "thy lips are still warm!" or something like that... she's been dead for like... a couple of days... HER LIPS COULDN'T BE WARM! What a dolt... An absolute idiot if you ask me... hahaha And WOW I just noticed that this basically had nothing to do with your poem! Oopsy.. haha kk well I liked the jello interpratation.. I wouldn't have thought of that. I think I've read this before.. yeah I have and I don't wanna repeat anything I've already said cuz.. yeah. Wicked job nick! Tutals huns :o)

man why are poems always so sad. I have yet to see a rly good happy poem. But its rly good! Sry i not rly good at reviewing on poems cuz i suck at writing them nd i have nothin rly to say other than RLY GOOD! ttyl!

woa! that was so good! i wondered where the poem was going in the first few lines and was really surpirsed at how it ended! beautiful descriptions! u did great! I LOVED it!

p.s. thanx for my review. really appreciate it!

wow. wow wow wow wow wow. lol. that was sad. really really really really really sad. yea. i feel feel feel feel feel like repeating myself. yea. pretty good. but sad sad sad sad sad.

mk. I liked this one a lot *gathers thoughts* Alright at first I thought behind the poem and thought that this was about a girl. Then I tried to figure out what girl it was about (cause my bro. says you told him who you like so yeah...me and your bro. and other people are trying to figure it out) but then I took the poem literal and started thinking about your best friend that you lost...so I guess it could actually be both but there might just be one of those that you had in mind when you wrote it. Anways, good job!