I like the last line. It gives the impression of something new. I love the bolds and italics. It sets them apart from the rest of the poem, like they're special. Good poem overall.

~Leeona Trance

This reminds me of... someone... XDI LOVE IT. Write more poems... I like them...

Mwahahahahaha, now I am the one who shall be stalking you! O.O;

This poem is speaks to me in a lot of ways... I can't quite explain how but I really like the formatting with the bold and italics in these thingys ( ) whatever they're called, almost like it's something you can't really say outloud... if that makes sense... *cough*

well, off to review your other poems! :D