Reviews for The Sinner's Bride |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dont beat yourself up :D lol i like and delaney.. seems like an interesting character :)update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thanks for letting me know that.. i confused myself with kyla and all. oh is the pain because she ate the pomegranate and left hell, or does it sear deeper now that she can not reach heaven's touch? I also wanted to know if any torturing of human souls goes on in this hell? I really liked this chapter even though it was so short. I am eally excited for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh don't beat yourself up! just keep writing - you definitely left me hanging here with this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww not the guilt trip! Darn angels! Can't rissy and demion hide away somewhwere and have lots of roamnce? That sounds positivly wonderful wouldn't you agree? I love the last part where demion holds rissy's hand in a protective way!You won't lose any readers but you will make an italian girl very happy if you update soon!Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() That took quite some time. I actually had to reread the previous chapter so that I wasn't lost. THANK YOU! And I will help you beat yourself up if it ever takes so long again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah this is one of the best stories ever.. keep updating and keep up the awesome work. i would most definitely love to read about the brothers. especially axel and bitchy roxie. wow i can't believe gabe is even still alowd in heaven after getting with a demon. how can rissy even be human considering who her parents are. and why can't rissy be a demon if her mom is... |
![]() ![]() Squee~ I loved this very muchu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking love the fiction...very original and quite sexy...god the sexual tension is killing me...hehe...well update soon!~Jinxie |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH. MY. GAH!I have just finished reading your story (and when I say reading, I mean face-staring-at-computer-without-blinking kind of reading), and I must say that this is one of the BEST stories I have ever read on FictionPress. ( I feel ashamed now having my story up...compared to yours, yours is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn, and mine is 1 Fish, 2 Fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish T_T) Welp, anyways, I eagerly await the 12th installment! -sits in dank, cob-webby room and eagerly awaits- -Areagne (PS: to answer your A/N question, I like Demion better than Alex. Alex is just too...innocent.) |
![]() ![]() Oh my goodness when I saw you updated I felt my heart drop! I got so excited! I love it! And I love the idea you have brewing. Honestly my favorite brother is Chael. I think it might be because I like his name but who cares. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() swet !;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() no how could you just end it there. I was getting so into it too. Great Chap. can't wait for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! Another review! Just as you wished, princess. Love ya! Keep the updates coming... I'm looking out for them. Peaches and Demons. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have a new fan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh..what exactly did Rissy drink? You really like keeping us in the dark dont'cha? I can't wait to meet/read about the new chracter..can't wait until the next chapter |