|Reviews for The Sinner's Bride|
| M. Haggarty chapter 4 . 2/7/2006
Wow, this story is really good so far! Keep up on the good work!
| Devil Queen chapter 4 . 2/7/2006
haha BADASS indeed ... love it! yeah i too wud rather see him with rissy than sum boy LOL! ... good job with the chapter.:D
| Broadway Nicka chapter 4 . 2/6/2006
Love seeing from his POV wasnt so fond of the drugs but loved the Hades Persepone story.
| Claire-a-bell chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
Alright, so that "flaming homosexual" remark was the highlight of this chapter. I cracked up.
Anyway, yes, more realistic, although I feel a little like she is losing some of her original personality, but I will allow that to be just her response to him. The main issue now is he's... too nice, I guess. Satan's son, you know? You expect him to be a little bit of a bastard and while I disagree with some stories (I'd expect him to understand humans very well, although a lot of people have him completely oblivious), I would expect him to be a bit insensitive. Anyway, I'll watch for the next chapter, cute interaction between the characters.
| RomanceAddict chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
I like this chapter. Keep updating! (I love bad boys!) I just think Alex sounds hot too!
| Lily chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
I thought the chapter was really good and funny. Keep updating.
| Devil Queen chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
OMG lol hes bisexual?... haha... Well im really enjoyin the story ..Keep Writin!
| Broadway Nicka chapter 3 . 1/25/2006
Demion seemed different but I loved it and want to see more.
| Jayn chapter 3 . 1/25/2006
I love people like that. They are SO NICE and very sweet. And thanks for telling me what that word meant. _; I was like Hm... big word. Wow. I don't know what it means. I guess I should ask her. Then I reviewed. Lol. PLEASE update this awesome story!
| AngelsWillFall chapter 3 . 1/25/2006
o0o0 he's bi? ok maybe not. i think you made cassie a little stero-type but its ok..stero-type preppy people normaly fit the stero-type
| Tattered Bloody Corsets chapter 3 . 1/25/2006
Ha that’s funny but yes I was right! Anyway good chapter though, it’s getting really interesting though but I want to hear more about the ‘fiancé’ thing like . . . why Eris as the bride? You know that kind of thing is the Diemon waiting for her to graduate or what? But other than that it was a fairly decent chapter.
| AngelsWillFall chapter 2 . 1/24/2006
i am now VERY interested...its very very good. _ keep up the good work :hands a pizie stick: good job
| Claire-a-bell chapter 2 . 1/23/2006
So, I'm glad you had her freaked out in this. In this day and age, even a brave girl would freak a bit in that kind of a situation. It was even somehow believable that she didn't start screaming or call the cops (partically because she just woke up, because I'm really off then too). I don't quite buy that she would close her eyes when he asked her to though, and while she made a good attempt at an escape, I still would think she would try a good oldfashioned yell, or a lunge at the phone to call 911. Great chapter, good kind of cliffhanger-y ending, and I hope you update soon.
| Devil Queen chapter 2 . 1/23/2006
Really cool! update soon .. i luv it :D
| Lily chapter 2 . 1/23/2006
Good chapter. Update soon.