this was awesome!

amazing.. I read the whole thing and I am stunned! its amazing

good job

I loved it !

I honestly haven't read such a well-written story on fictionpress in SO long, I wasn't even sure they really existed anymore. You've gained my admiration, that's for certain. ;p Brilliant story.

Well! That was a lovely story! . Not too sad... untill the end when everyone died... but it is still a wonderful story about a girl in love. I feel that you could have done better, but I still love it! I'm sorry about your brother, too. I'm glad you're not in a large slump about it like most people are after someone they love dies.

Revise soon! And kudos on completion!

~360~

I've just looked through your reviews and saw that I haven't reviewed, which is quite shocking to me, since I have read this story quite a time ago, while it was still in progress and I am so sorry that I hadn't reviewed. I was actually searching through my favourites and alerts to find this fic, because I know for a hundred percent that I did infact have this fic as my fave. But apparently since I hadn't reviewed, I'll review now and tell you that fic is amazing, I really had enjoyed reading it then and I have enjoyed re-reading and will again. It is a brill story, I love it!

Tecna ;)

This was amazing, i was crying at the end of it, when she was watching her friends with their kids (i get emotional)it was so good to read. Usually i get bored of reading stories and i end up just glancing over them, but i read this one word by word.

I don't even know what to write, I'm kind of speechless, it was a beautiful story, and I loved the ending, really, what a great story!

adorable, wonderful, many different positive adjectives. I almost cried at the end, when they started dying, it made me sad, oh well.

wow!

hahaha

your story made me cry happy tears.

they are all such lovely characters.

i'm so happy it had a happy ending.

its kinda sad how she had to watch her friends die and not being able to have her baby but i suppose all happy things come with a price. ive been reading this story non stop and its like 2 in the morning. what can i say, i got addicted. demion was such a fun character, i love how he is so opposite of Rissy. i love the hole rissy is good and kind and Demion... his badness makes him adoribly cute. ;)

This was amazing!

Wow. This story might have taken me all frickin day to read, but it was SO effing worth it! I gotta say, when Eris said that she had, "made her decision," i was a little worried, and then when i got to the next chapter (labeled,"Goodbye") I was even MORE worried, but I was SO happy with the way it turned out! I really liked the ending, it was sweet, touching, and it ALMOST made me cry. I LURVERDEDED it!

Congrats, and BTW, I am envious of your tattoo (queue the deadly sin mist floating in my ear...). I want one, but I'm not QUITE old enough, and I have a minor phobia of needles (this is how my mom knows I won't do heroine...lol)

Well, anyway, awesome story! Hope you write more in the future.

-Ashley

I cried) Especially about Jason. But it was so beautiful... I saw this story on SKOW, I think? But if I didn't, I SHOULD have, cause it was fucking amazing! I loved Demion's childish talking in the previous chapters, like a little boy with a nwe toy, or an excited puppy, lol. Anyway, I loved it...

I wish I could tell you more than just 'I loved it'...maybe why or something useful to you as a writer. But I can't. Don't know why-I guess I'm speechless ? Yeah that pretty much sums up my opinion of your story. It was sweet and original.

Hm.

That's all I have to say. (Very good story though. n...n)