This story is so unique. I really like the plot, because it is very original.

Good authors can write a cliche talentily, really good authors can turn a cliche into their own story by adding their own spin on the story, Brilliant outstanding authors can come up with a unique original plot and deliver it talentily, emotionally and passionately. You are one of those authors. I have about 60 authors on my favourites list (i got edit it sometime) I say only about 10 of them qualify as Brilliant Outstanding authors with unique plots.

okay, so it's 11:38PM and both my parents think i'm asleep.

i'm trying really hard not to make too much noise on the keyboard.

i was considering writing a review tomorrow when i had more time and wouldn't cause 'the wrath of parentals', but i figured, with a story like yours that i loved that much, it deserved a midnight review.

i loved it.

and in no way, shape or form did i dislike any part of this story.

and that's the honest truth.

i disliked alex for getting between demion and eris, but i soon got over it.

i loved demion for being such a hot demon (in my head he was portrayed by drew fuller and well - he's hot)

i honest to god (or satan, if you think about the story's content) loved every minute of it.

the story is on my favourites - be proud of your brilliant work.

izzie

I think Demion is so sweet.

Sniffles.. The stories all kinds of finished. I will miss you story. This chapter was ok but I thought the ending would have a little something more. I'm not sure what but it felt like it was missing something. Other than that I loved this story and think you did a really good job writing it.

Oh My God. (lol) You write so well, and have such interesting ideas and I LOVED your story. (I just found your story like a day or two ago and I was addicted to it :) I wish I would have joined and known about fictionpress sooner.. till laters and again, great story :)

heya

can i say that if demons can go up to earth why didnt she visit her frens?

I like it so far... but Demion isn't what I would expect the Devil's son to be like. He seems rather... naive and not a... 'bad ass' like I would think he should be. He is overly nice... not rough and manly. But that might just be the way that you want it.. and seeing how many chapters there are, I think it is too late anyways. Well I like it and will continue reading!

I must say that even though i find "defying god" kind of disturbing but the story was good none the less... different style and amazing technique... begining was kind of dull though, and some events were too dramatic u couldnt imagine they would really happen... all in all.. the final chapter was the best, it touches ur heart n clenches on it..

The subject is a little touchy, but gd story in general

I am so sorry to hear about your brother's death...it's never easy...I love the story so far!

Aww thats so sad thought, it made my heart feel like it was breaking, about her friends dieing, but its sweet what she did for love. Hm im sad now lol i want to cry. Her friends named they're kids after her, and the year book, with the heart. :'( Over all, wow! this story was original, and wonderful, with real life emotions! I loved it entirely, and loved the characters and their realationshipd with eachtoher, and how they were all connected! Great Great Job! I loved the ending as well, its really good, but so sad lol :'(

Well it was nice reading this story and you'll still be on my author alert list, so i can read your next story? lol. Till then adios, hope it'll be soon though! :P

ThankYOU! I Love You. You finally did it!

Aw! I glad that there was a way she could have kids! I truly enjoyed this story! Hooray! Great Job!

I really enjoyed your story. You have such a big (and strange?) imagination! I'm glad that Eris chose Demion, because even though he was evil, you made us fall in love with his character. Great job.

Although poorly written, your summary can be quite captivating. I was hoping that the story would actually be interesting. However, after reading but the first two or paragraphs, pardon my vague description, it has proved to be a disappointment. Many of your sentences irk me as they are incoherent. It is true that if I try extremely hard, I manage to understand a tad of what you are trying to convey. However, reading is supposed to be relaxing and not to decipher the meaning to poorly structured and written works. Please save yourself further humiliation and edit your piece or if you are incapable to do so then find yourself an editor that would be of use. Perhaps a lot of what I am saying is not grammatically correct because of my lack of punctuation here and there, but I assure you, it is much better than what you have written.

wow... awesome finnish, a great way to finnish it, i felt really sad as she described watching her friends grow old... i can imagine the distant feeling she felt watching eris and paige! poor thing... loved it though, i looked at the date you started it and the date you finnished it and i realised i had been reading this for just under a year! i wish you well in all you do! and hope to read more of your things!