Good ending!

I'm glad you didn't get too cheery on us, and was pleased Eris had enough common sense and patience to wait for a year.

I think her friends might have had overly sad deaths, but I guess it was just you trying to show how unhappy it made Eris. I would consider making them a little more typical though.

Great last few lines, beautiful.

Now I can't wait for your next story.

That ending was more bitter than I'd expected. But still great. I loved the last 3 sentences possibly more than any in the whole story.

:)

really. a lovely ending.

aww this chapter made me cry T_T great story.. seriously. and you know what.. i think that what you wrote was so.. realistic in a kind of way that mabe its true ! haha.. no i know it couldnt be but hey you never know. its like reading harry potter and then thinkig that there such a world out there you know... ) nice job, this should be a movie or something.

it was almost a bitter sweet ending but oh it is just so romantic how she could give up everthing for him... heh I hope you know I prayed to god not to be mad at me for reading and that I would definatly have chose heaved... hehehe *sweatdrops* I really hope I'm not lying to myself.

OMFG OMFG OMFG THAT WAS AMAZING! LIKE SERIOUSLY! I was soo drawn in by each chapter and... and... I Didn't want it to end *cries* lol Great job on the story!

Please, I'm begging you, do NOT abandon this story now that you are almost done with it. My little fic-loving heart had been broken enough already by authors with stories I just absolutely adore but then abandons said story unfinished. I love this story so much so I really don't want to add you in my 'hated authors' coz right now you are not top of my 'favorite authors' list:)

You're almost done? What...? I think I had a mini-heartattack when you said that.

I don't want it to end. Wah.

holy shit. this story is fucking deep. i mean ou created another freakin' reality.. this is messing up my brain.. but I FUCKING LOVE IT! hope yur the type of writer that updates soon )

~Keysha.

YOU MUST UPDATE!

woa so basically the angle like saved her right? and if she ate she would be stuck there. how could she not rmemeber!

aww the end... SEQUEL SOON ... PLEASE ! !

o i liked that (claps hands) I'm so glad she chose dameion. Can't wait for the next chapter.

oh my god, thats so weird (not the story, i love it) but when demion tells eris her bday us august 31 and her fave fruit is peaches and fave color is green becasue thats the same as me. hehe XD

Aw soo sweet