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Whoa. Who knew our little Emmy had it in her to write such a chapter? Not I, (who, might I say, have been your most loyal reader)but I'm not complaining.

Hm. Must be why you took such a long time to post it up, huh? Fantasizing about sexy sexy Demion... You naughty girl.

HOLY.

CRAP.

I love this. I can't even really describe it to ya... I just totally love this series you've got goin' on here. The characters are pretty well developed, it's an entertaining (and kinda cute) plot... Lovin' it, hun.

Great job.

~ARS

heh, yay! UPDATES :D lol, well update. but youll update again wont ya? lol, thanks :] update again .. soon?

So cute! I'm sad it is almost over! :*(

I am in choir too! I love singing!

O! Tough choice... But he is so hot!

I am still in love with Demion and I think that your story is AMAZING so don't stop!

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while! I've been busy!

I LOVE DEMION! He is so sexy! Can't wait for the new character!

ok, so please tell me that you are going to keep this going, or at least do a sequel because you have to continue! Ok, i said my peace, im done. keep up the good work! :):)

please update sooner i can't wait that long again!

Aw... how sweet. It's nice that you were able to give Eris a good push in the 'wrong' direction with the whole 'daddy not giving a damn about her' thing. Otherwise, things would have just been angsty and icky for everybody. Quince, though... is that even a real fruit?

Having just read the story from start to almost finnsh I would like to say: Wow, I'm impressed. The depth of your characters is enviable and I love the ideas. You have a huge amount of tallent and I wouldn't be suprised to see this published in a few years time. There is one thing that is bothering me though. I have read and re-read the first couple of chapters looking for where Demion says that he is the son of the devil and I can't find it. I can see where Eris says that he said it, I can see where he says it to himself but I can't find where he tells her. I'm probably being a bit blind but it's the kind of thing that will keep me wake at night.

anyways, looking forward to the next installment.

Obsidian

goodness.

Oh gosh, I totally loved this! Please, keep on writing! Oh... looks like ya have!

I love the character's names. I dunno, they just seem to match their personality.

Peace, Love, & Happiness!

~ARS

Aw! So sweet and cute! PLEASE Update soon! :)

Terrific, as always.

I can't even begin to describe how thrilled I am that Eris isn't being an idiot about the whole thing. It's good you still show her trying to pursue her own passions and interests.

My only issue is that Gabriel came off as a huge asshole, which I'm sure was your intent. But it seems a bit odd that, even if he was extremely upset, he was that big of a jerk to her. If you ever rewrite the story, I might suggest making him a bit kinder, but with the same level of cluelessness. The line about him loving everything in heaven worked quite well, though. I'll be looking forward to that chapter.