Reviews for California
Decollage chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Beautiful wordplay, your imagery is amazing.

California is also the largest state for agricultural big industry, and trust me- that is the dark side of anything.

In truth, if you look hard enough, any place is horrible. In a beautiful chain of islands outside of Haiwii, Asian girls are kept as virtual slaves in garment factories, making clothing for American stores. OSHA visits once a year, and it's not as though safety standards are inforced. Baltimore, a supposedly glorious city, is filled to the brim with literally starving homeless.

The tourists just don't know where to look, and of course no one would say anything- it's human nature to look away.

You get kudos for looking in the right direction, and for voicing it so eloquently.