Reviews for terrafirma
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Written in layers to be peeled apart and savored.. I love, love, love the opening three lines.
utopian sky chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
you always come up with the best titles. ;) i love this. i do get the william carlos williams influence, and i love the diction and word choice you use, especially with things like "palmstothesky upturned" and "unabletomove immoble." you make an ordinary, everyday occurence something special and unique!
multiples of six chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I like this ) I like the title especially & how it relates to the end bit about the ground. Nicely written.
littlest clouds chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
what the hell does your comment have to do with my poem? get bent, troll.
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
dude...137 things you've written...poor thing can't get a girlfriend/boyfriend?