|Reviews for terrafirma|
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Written in layers to be peeled apart and savored.. I love, love, love the opening three lines.
| utopian sky chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
you always come up with the best titles. ;) i love this. i do get the william carlos williams influence, and i love the diction and word choice you use, especially with things like "palmstothesky upturned" and "unabletomove immoble." you make an ordinary, everyday occurence something special and unique!
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I like this ) I like the title especially & how it relates to the end bit about the ground. Nicely written.
| lostcoastlines chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
what the hell does your comment have to do with my poem? get bent, troll.
| white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
dude...137 things you've written...poor thing can't get a girlfriend/boyfriend?