Reviews for Finding Serendip
Was it something about a cookie chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
It made me go: "Aww. :3" Things don't make me go, "Aww." a lot. -offers virtual cookies- Kudos to you. Lovely one-shot. Not enough to be all sappy, yet enough to make you say something like, "That's so sweet." and then remind you of the colour pink. Or summin'. I don't know why. o.o;
Lucifer's Sonata chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
bravo! That was a wonderful one-shot fic! i normally stay away from them because i always want so much more, and i was worried there for a second that you were going to leave this story unfinished and I was going to walk away empty handed, but omgosh...was i wrong! the ending was wonderful and the story line was controlled so well! You managed to write a short story that normally takes people *raises hand* at least 10 chapters to explain! that was amazing _ good job!
Esquirella chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I really liked this story a lot. It was really heartwarming!
Kittentits chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Oh god I loved started out slow and I was getting all disappointed but damn, was that good. Shouldn't have doubted the greatness of your writing ability. I love how it turned out. Very nice. And though is maeks me want more, like all one-shots tend to do, you ended it just right that won't ever leave me queationing like some one-shots do. Thank hugs!
angstophile chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
"...when the rolling of crooked wagon wheels and steady clopping finally muted the silence."

That's a really cool phrase; the idea of 'muting silence' just sort of went *click* when I read it. I like it a lot. :B

Malin seems sort of adorable to me. Like he needs snuggles and a big fluffy blanky.
red chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
wah, so cute! . excellent fic!
rachel chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
this piece made me so very happy. love crosses so many boundaries. thank you
Ashye chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Wow I'm the first reviewer! This was such a sweet little story and reading it made me feel all warm inside, lol. I am still sort of jealous over Vasilis having other wives but I guess Malin is just a better person than I am. I'm glad because they are entirely adorable.I loved the story!
wizzan chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I'm finding it a weird that your character's name is Malin and mine's is Milan. Although i havent posted a story of him yet *grumble* that's my main character.

Anywho, other than that rather pointless fact *embaressed cough* I love this story too (though Spontaneity remains my absolute fav), although, i think it went a tad too fast. But still good! Better than what i can do...
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