Reviews for back at the beginning
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
Oh wow, this is so beautiful and heartfelt, one of your best pieces, great work
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
aw...sad. relatable and touching. the emotion was raw and beautiful. keep on going!
iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetry chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I'll second the first reviewer. Some people just aren't blessed with the ability to read other people's mind. Darn.
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Maybe you should try and tell her what she is putting you though... she might just be oblivious to what you are feeling. You do what you have to do, what you feel like you have to do.

Good work.