|Reviews for This Is A Nation Afraid of Silence|
| NatureForTheHuman chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
hunny if you can get five bars in mars
then where the hell do you live?
all seriousness i think this is my favorite of the night
you still owe me a black and white painting btw
love you :]
| elixx chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
How true.. so true it's sad.
I hadn't really realized how much man's greatest inventions had allowed us to fall apart.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
This is so true! You should really find a place to get this published, we all need a dose of truth in our lives once in a while. The rhyme at the end wrapped it up nicely. Great poem
| J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Pretty good peice of work, with a good message that America needs to be slapped in the face with. At times your rhyming sounded very forced, but your rythym is pretty good. I love the way you use parentesis (sp?) artisicly- very cool. Nice work.
| drunk pigchicken chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
very very well written. i do like it. i think it could possibly be a little better ((maybe. im not sure if i like it better now or after my suggestion)) if you lengthen it a tad. ((if you dont, itll still be a very good poem, a heads up, too!))