Reviews for Love Never Lasting
blackflowers chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
"Feasting himself sick

On her pathetic sins"

~great imagery and expression in this, i agree with the other reviewers about the last line and really look forward to more of your writing (:
A. E. Custer chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
This poem was an awesome read - I really think the diction and you're writing style really paints a fantastic image.
paytonpage chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
that was one of the best i've ever read im at a loss for words.
Ordrossal chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Other than 'I really love your poems' I don't no what to say. I look forward to your future works.
Aluminum Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
Wow. Once again, very nice! It's very pessimistic, but the imagry's amazing. I really like: "With razorblade smiles", and "Enslaved by cursed skin" for some reason.
ShyDarkness chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
o, nice. I definetely liked the last line. It had a nice finality to it.
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
oh cool - i like "razorblade smiles" and "no love to conquer hate". Keep Writing.