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WOW chapter 2 . 2/7/2006 Wow, im glad there's a sequel to 'Don't panic'.. I'm liking this one better than the former because Jordan and Clay were my favorite characters before. They always evoked more emotion than Gabby and Paul so I'm glad that you're including them. Can't wait to read more ! |
Irony's.Last.Words.Were chapter 2 . 2/7/2006 Hey, great story!Update soon, this could really be something. You know, at first, I thought Clay and Jordan were brother and sister, you might want to be a little clearer about that if you rewirte the first chapter. Other than that, it was excellent. Keep updating! Much Lovs, Sitchwell |
stanhops chapter 2 . 2/7/2006 Let me just say that I love you! Finally another chapter. I was beginning to worry. And it was a good one, although it was just introductory. Please update soon. I AM DEFINITELY READING!By the way, you're on my favorites list with this story too just cuz you updated! |
dorydafish chapter 2 . 2/7/2006 I always wanted clay and jordan to get together. this is so cute... LOL! not to mention funny. LUV IT Was more of a silent reader of dont panic but i do have to say this story is amazing. Especially coz in dont panic my fav characters were clay and jordan. Was rooting for Gabby and paul jus so somehow clay and jordan could get together. Wow its rele cool, especially how this chapter ended. hehe. jordan is funny and u can so tell clay is falling for her already...LOL! Hope that u update real soon. will be waiting. DDF X |
alltw2mars chapter 1 . 1/29/2006 YAY! You're writing a sequel. Okay, you must update soon. I can't wait, so update, update, update. |
gonnabefamous chapter 1 . 1/28/2006 Cool, keep writing I'm looking forward to everything! |
Manda Pantxike Sterling chapter 1 . 1/24/2006 I love this new beginning. I can't wait to hear what the new story's from Clayton and Jordan's part are. You might already know about this little boo-boo; but in the third line from the end, "drive" should probably be "drove away". Alright, can't wait to get into this new story. |
aurora borealis chapter 1 . 1/24/2006 Interesting start. :) I loved "Don't Panic", by the way. I feel sorry for Jordan...Can't wait to read more. |
mo chapter 1 . 1/22/2006 i just read don't panic, and now i am reading this, and let me tell u i am so happy. i loved clay and jordan, they make too cute of a update! |
SkepticCritic chapter 1 . 1/18/2006 OMG! I just about had a heart attack when I got your e-mail...You have no idea how happy this has made me...Okay well you might but...Anyway...Oh...my...gawd...What's really funny is that I actually scanned over this title...But since I'm currently reading 135 other stories, I try not to look at summaries otherwise it just adds to the list of what I check everyday and it's more to procrastinate...See? I wouldv'e never found it...But I must admit this is the most excited I've ever been by a sequel...I was squealing and bouncing at just praising someone or other that you didn't feel like being tracked down...I'm so terribly excited it's not even funny... Anyway...Oh...I love Clay and Jo as much as ever...I like Paul and Gabby too but Clay and Jo are my favorites...I just can't help it...Oh...They're sharing the same bedroom...This could be interesting...Not necessarily sexually but I so cannot wait to see when their personalities clash...Ahh...Oh goodness...Now I've got goosebumps and the jitters and I'm just so excited...As I've already said but sometimes there are things that just need to be said again...My personal favorite to add into reviews on fictionpress... Fiction reveals truth that reality obscures. - Jessamyn West |
j.u.s.t. .f.o.r. .m.e chapter 1 . 1/18/2006 omg your back! kool, so the love thingy mabobber is gonna be between clay and jordan, the rejects? even though they're not really rejects update soon |
stanhops chapter 1 . 1/18/2006 You do not even know how much I love you right now. I COULD HUG YOU and I hate hugging. So, this was a fabulous start to what I assume to be a fabulous story. Please update very very soon...this was just a simple teaser right? Like a prologue that has tons of chapters posted right behind it. They're going to hate each other, but they belong together...they really do! I LOVE THEM SO MUCH...I just want another chapter...please. Clay sounds really cute, and although Jordan isn't the perfect heroine, her first scene was very comical. PLEASE UPDATE SOON...very soon, and if you ever need someone for betaing, I'm here...just review one of my stories if you're interested and if not my ego will remain in tact if you provide me with another chapter of great reading soon! |