So sweet! I love the switches in POV, I think it's always more interesting to see a story from multiple views, then the same voice the entire time.

Great story progression-Jet and Dillon are funny. *Yum. Jet*

"“I still have no idea how you convinced me that this was a good idea.”

“Try not to think about it. It’ll just hurt your head.”"

-My favorite line in the whole chapter.

Great chapter-Dillon, while a male bimbo, is very amusing.

That is great!

I like these two characters immensely (Or, what I can remember of them) and the thought of reading this story is what got me to read the first one. (I had thought it was a more direct sequel)

Love the restuarant (sp?) scene-very funny.

I was mad, though. Fictionpress was messing up, or something was, and was only showing me about half of the chapter for the longest time.

Great chapter

Please continue the story! I love it so! I almost died when I saw you updated. It made my day!

This is one of my favourite stories ever, period. Please oh please oh please update! It would be a huge pity if you didn't. It's an amazing story (both prequel and sequl), but you've left a lot of 'mysteries' and things not quite explained. It's cruel to leave us guessing :( Haha just kidding. But really, wonderful story (I cannot say that enough) and PLEASE update!

plz update! please...

It's been quite a while since your last update...are you still intending to finish this story? I sure hope so, since you left your readers with something of a cliffhanger! :) As a college student, I understand how life can be very busy, but I am eagerly awaiting the answers to the hints that have been scattered throughout this story!

UPDATE PLEASE!

It's been so long since I've reviewed; I'm sorry. I've been busy w/ marching band season & stuff. But I finally got to read your latest 3 chapters. Super Long and Wonderfully written. Of course, you know of the little things. They don't matter as much as the whole big picture. But then again, the little things are what make up life. Right from the words of Akuji. Sorry, I'm just being annoying now. Great chapters; can't wait to read more!

Happy tearyeyedness...again...He's just being so sweet...It's so cute...I love it when you update...It never fails to make my day better...Even if I do read the update a week or so later...It's still wonderful...

heya, this was a great chappie. i can't wait for more to see what happens. cya next time ~ Alenor.

AN UPDATE! A huge fan of yours I am. I love your characters! Keep on going!

aw...would it be weird to say, that i would wait forever...it does, so scratch that. Anyways great update, loving clay and jo sweetness. Also i am dying to know sven and jo history. Oh Oh and rooting for dillon and cassidy!

I love it :) Thanks for updating, I thought you fell off the earth! Ok well, good luck with school hecticness!

yaay! u updated! i hadnt realized how much i missed all these characters. im still lovin this. clays such a sweetie! and a who's the new character? hmm? u'll have to update as soon as u can else i'll explode! toodles!