Wee... it's so good... I can't believe I'm reading it non-stop from chp 1 to 6. Very very detailed and I guess you really picture the scenes nicely without awkwardness.

I applaud for you...

Updates pls...

Whoa.. this was a very nice surprise! Glad to see you're back to it :) I was hoping to hear from Ben, but perhaps next chapter?

I'm relieved that the tensions between Ethan and Marshall has dissolved (at least for now..).

I hope for more soon. Let me know what I can do for inspiration!

wow, that was a rather large time laps from chapter 4 to chapter 5. But a really good idea. I like the story so far - its going to my favs. And I honestly hope youre going to update soon! I want to know why Ben didnt come! :D

I am so happy to see that this story hasn't been forgotten. I loved this story when I first read it so long ago and hoped that it would be continued. I acutally had to re-read it all over again before reading this latest update and I enjoyed it just as much as I had when I first came upon this story way back when. Thank you so much and looking forward to more.

~Lareine

Aww.. such a great, unique plot with such a sad new chapter. Hopefully Ben's just been held up. Traffic or something..

I love both Ethan and Marshall, but that 8 months bit was a pretty low blow coming from Ethan. I don't necessarily blame him for feeling hurt, but the way he brought it up seemed to come out of nowhere. I think Marshall knows how wrong he was for disappearing; it seems that Ethan's comment was made solely to hurt Marshall. And for what? To set a negative tone right off the bat? Oh, well. It's obvious they haven't remedied that little conflict between themselves. Perhaps Marshall owes Ethan a bit more of an explanation.

Hope to see Ben come to his senses, though I'm not entirely surprised he hasn't shown. I'd hope that he'd have atleast called if he wasn't planning on showing.

Anyway... love it! Can't wait for more- you've got an excellent thing going with this one.

Oh no! This is so sad right now. But then, who knows what's going through Ben's mind what with such a biotch of a mother to give him away to his aunt, marry his father and not tell either of them what the hell was going on for 12 years.

i liked this it was good. and i wish i had wrote this review right after reqding it then i might have something more to say. but i do remember i liked it. it was sweet, there was a nice bit of humor in it.

An answer to the letter! I'm thrilled to see these two planning an awkward Thanksgiving together. A most delightful chapter.

YES! You updated! This chapter was wonderful and it gave us the answer we've all been dying for regarding that letter... a son, WOW! And the same age as Ethan? WOW! This story is certainly taking an interesting turn and I would love to see another update in the near future. Thank you so much for not forgetting this story.

I'm so glad this has been updated. I really like the story and am looking forward to reading more, :)

Real, well-written characters? I can hardly believe it. Really, brilliant story from what I've seen. I'm not in the habit of begging for updates, but...please update soon.

I've read this story and enjoyed what you have so far. I'm hoping that you continue because not only do I adore Ethan and Marshall but you've peaked my curiousity on what Marshall encountered with his divorce papers. Looking forward to an update in the near future, I hope.

I really, really like this story. It is extremely intriguing, and somehow realistic. Unlike so much of the tripe on this site, it is extremely well written. It draws the reader in, delighting them and exciting them with it's simplicity and grace. I'm in love with Marshall! Please update soon.

I just discovered this story, and don't usually leave reviews for stories when the chapter's been out a while, but I felt like I had to make sure that you were continuing this and continuing to post this.

Ethan's so cute. And so's Marshall. And together they're sweet and adorable and it's just nice. Though I suppose the niceties end after this chapter... It's a great story.

) Mandraco.

This story is adorable. Just adorable. I really the characters, the plot, everything. I don't like the cliffhanger, though. It's actually nice to see the divorce process like this. I'm kind of surprised that it didn't take that much for Marshall to come out of the closet, but it seems like it was always there, in the back of his mind, that he also liked guys (maybe that drunken night?). As to Ethan, he's adorable. Nothing but. I really would love to see more of this.