Reviews for Sidewalk Serenade
Soul Effrontery chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Hm. I like it. I was slightly thrown by the fact that random lines rhyme. I would have made it consistent or not at all. And some of the rhythem is off, but I'm a poetry snob. :)I did like it though, and the repitition of Dance was well done.
mint cookie chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
it's nice, in a... bust-your-head sorta way. i usually don't dig these kind of poems, but this is really passionate.

good work!

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Jasmine Pulchritude chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
Woah. It's powerful. I like it. I really do. The imagery is amazing. The way it's written is so appalling yet pulls me in. Superb.