Reviews for The Assassin
Vexed and Tired chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
This looks pretty good, definately has potential to absolutely kick ass. Your chapters possibly could be a bit longer, but maybe the shortness gives the story more of a fast pace. Who knows?
EvenstarEmbers chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
o. I like it. Very 24 like to me...and i love that show.

"watching the Cadets through the glass walls of his office and counting how many he could get suspended for inappropriate footwear couldn’t occupy him indefinitely."

that was my favorite part. I giggled.

next chapter!