Reviews for Live in Fifteen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hm...Interesting. I haven't really read any stories like this...ever. Good job, I didn't really actually, see any mistakes. This is a cute story. ~Miyako |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't find a way to contact you regarding beta reading. YOur pms are turned off and I cannot find your email address. Please send me a way to contact you so that I can be your beta. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! Just to let you know that I read your stories a longg time ago and I was surprise to see it gone. What happened to the old character names? Why aren't the chapters here anymore? I finally found you (u changed ur name) and now the story I liked isn't here anymore.. :(. Anyway, just wanted to encourage you to please give life to this story again- I love it so much. I hope you have time to read some of my work here on ficpress :). I'll go read Off the ice soon. Can't wait to hear your review of my work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't read any of your other stories, but this looks really interesting! Keep writing. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there. Just to let you know I have been trying to find you forever! I, too have changed my name here and there. The one story I remembered most was "Live at Fifteen" or something like that, and now I finally found you. MUAHAHA I wanted to let you kno that I read all the chapters you've written for this story. The ending was sweet, with that letter. Hahah. Now that I have come back, I've seen it erased and with a new chapter beginning from #1. Kate and Danny are no longer there, the characters I fell in love with, and is replaced with Andy and Allyson. :(... I mean ur the author and U can do anything you want but... but... *sniff* It was ur first story and I think keeping it the way it was before shows that you have improved through ur work. That you actually see your progress. I thought Kate and Danny was fine and the whole story as a unity fits perfectly at the time it was written. I dunno... Anyway. Ur in my favorite author's list :) Keep up the good work! What ever u write, I'm a fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() For this being you first story... dang girl, you are a great author! I fell in love with the characters. The way you wrote Amy's thoughts was wonderful! I loved hearing them. Made the story so real. I'm glad you wrote this story and I can't wait to read more of you stories! XOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe ... this is cute. :D i love it when lil kids kiss each other hah! its so innocent and stuff _ btw, wat does beta stand for? (not da cheese) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a confession and that is the fact that I utterly love Danny and Kate. Maybe its the fact that the same thing just happened to me a month ago or its one of my random bouts of happiness. I'm happy I stuck around to see what may have happened. This was a great story and if you ever rewrite it, I will be sure to read that too. & yay! I got thanks, so ha (; |
![]() ![]() I loved ti, it was amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Very cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was good for a first story |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful. so beautiful. OMG YOU MADE ME CRY. i get all choked up with gorgeous friendships and happy endings. sappy i know, but i'm just idealistic. i love how their friendship evolved into something else. i love how it's kinda typical in the guy-and-girl best-friends-then-fall-in-love thing, but unique at the same time because it's Danny and Katie. and Jake and Aly. i love this. lots of kudos for writing this. you put feeling into it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw tear its finally over i'm sad to see it over but im glad that it all worked out in the end too cute :) izzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY. I've been dying in that time since I last read Chapter 7. Its been a while, yes. BUT, Danny and Kate are finally together. (I think I'm going to have a parade.) WHE. This chapter has officially made my day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Please update soon. ) |