Reviews for The Were Legends: She Wolf
Zero Serenity chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
doesn't seem like a bad story, maybe you'll want to update it, and explain the cryptic last sentence, lol. .

Zero
Dead Deactivated chapter 5 . 7/25/2009
Fantastic Write the next chapter soon
Moonlight Tigress chapter 5 . 4/4/2006
wow... nice touch. real nice...

im really enjoying this story.. and im glad youre having fun with the characters. i can really see it in the way you write them...

nice fight scene by the way...very, very cool... :)
The Manifesto chapter 5 . 4/2/2006
Not a bad chapter, although some more descriptive action would be nice. I want to HEAR the sound of the Hunters being slain! ::cackles madly::

Anyway. Becky certainly seems very arrogant about her combat skills; perhaps there is a smackdown waiting for her in the future? We await with eager eyes!
The Manifesto chapter 4 . 3/6/2006
A good chapter overall. Nice introduction to the other Shifter clans, and also a nice elaboration of the personality traits that run through each clan(ie, Desiders are more risk takers, etc)

And that Aidan guy is really awesome, too. I want to see him kill some people next chapter, though. )
One Desire chapter 4 . 3/4/2006
Good chapter, but the ending seemed abrupt. But other than that, it was great.
Moonlight Tigress chapter 4 . 3/2/2006
cool... party time...

love it... and i can tell youre really getting into it... :)

keep it up!
Moonlight Tigress chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
wow... cool... kinda creepy but cool...

love twins... you totally hooked me in now... :)

and cool, thanks...
One Desire chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
Short and sweet. A bit of a filler chapter, yeah?
One Desire chapter 2 . 1/30/2006
This is the same One Desire that reviews all your other stories. I'm just too lazy to log in.

But yes. You're writing as an older character. Yay. Have fun with that. But be careful that you don't slip back into high school...ness. I've done that a couple of times.

So um. I liked this chapter. Nice introduction to the main characters.
Moonlight Tigress chapter 2 . 1/30/2006
oh, ouch! love this character already!

shes got such an edge to her!

brilliant, as always! really well described too!
One Desire chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
hooked. ]
Moonlight Tigress chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
nice start... i like how youve given us the intro on werewolves and all that... like folklore or mythology... i can almost hear a storyteller reading this out loud...

well done... please continue soon!
Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
This prologue sounds very intriguing. It gives a good glimpse to how your story will be working and what will be involved. One small portion of it seemed a bit confusing to me when you were describng the effect the phases of the moon had on the weres. Other than that it was is was very good and I can't wait to see how the first chapter will start out.

I really enjoyed it because at the moment I am working on a werewolf/Lycan novel here on Fictionpress if you ever wish to check it out.