Reviews for The Determination of Dreams
entity.unkown chapter 41 . 4/2/2009
:D also addicting hmm...is it just me, or are there hints possible kiv/keziah?
Anonymous chapter 41 . 12/31/2007
Please start the third book soon. You're leaving all of us hanging.
merrymowmow chapter 41 . 9/19/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Wolf's Night chapter 41 . 6/26/2007
Awsome second story! Your world is awsome and very well written. The plots move along nicely and don't follow many of the usual lines. Great!

I want to know where he went! Jeez cliffhangers are frustrating (to the reader) but that's okay I do that sometimes too. Can't wait for the third installment to be up!

Wolf's Night
leo the llama chapter 41 . 6/14/2007
o.o

WHAT? GAH! you can't leave it off like that! that was mean! GAH

::shakes fist:: gr

but very well written

-leo...-.-
Moonlite Star chapter 41 . 6/13/2007
Hmm...I'm going to assume that this change is good for kiv, but that cliffhanger didn't exactly reveal too much. :( that conversation between Nevrian and Suze was certainly a nice tidbit of information.

please keep your word and don't leave us in suspense too long. ;)

congrats on finishing a second book! :) can't wait to read the next!
Dani P chapter 41 . 6/13/2007
uh such a good chapter. I can't wait for more.
Silver Plum chapter 41 . 6/13/2007
OMG! you need to write a sequel..like now! lol

I love this story, the action, the suspense, the romance/nonromance going on, which I'll be honest and say is brilliantly written.

The way you have been able to develop these characters and the story and not make it cliqued or boring is quite an accomplishment. What I love is that all the characters have spunk but yet you still show them to have weaknesses. You make me hate them and then make me love them.

The key to good writing is the ability make the reader visualize what your writing and then make them read through the lines so they really connect with the character on some level. You've definitely done that here. And what I love is that even though its the second part of you story and your going on to your third story, you still have all of us wondering about the two main characters love/non-love/something. You've written their relationship like something that could happen...but if it doesn't it's okay...basically your messing with our minds lol

Your doing great!

Keep writing!

Post up the sequel soon! :)
Dachande663-ff chapter 41 . 6/13/2007
No! You can't leave us all hanging. It's bad enough with the cliff hangers between chapters, I might go mad trying to work out what's happened to Kiv. I'm guessing Nev has something to do with it.

This was an excellent story, much like the first. I hope you continue to write, you've got a brilliant talent.
For What Its Worth chapter 40 . 5/2/2007
Who wiped the records? Or were they wiped? Doesn't Xienna know Kez better?
leo the llama chapter 40 . 4/28/2007
you say i'm cruel to my characters, you're not much better...

but very well written as always! though I'm sad there's only two more chapters...

alas, but looking forward to those!

-leo
Dani P chapter 40 . 4/27/2007
ah. i liked this chapter, and now I can't wait for the other one..the defense..this should be hard...
Moonlite Star chapter 40 . 4/26/2007
Not to complain...O:-) but this chapter wasn't /that/ much longer, in my opinion. But I certainly know how hard endings are to write. I've already come to a pause on my story...and have the feeling I won't even be able to finish it. I liked this chapter though. I'm curious why Devrian just randomly showed up. Why is he interested in Kiv's trial? Xienna...I like that she's seemingly playing a more and more important role in this story.

Update when you can! :) I don't look forward to this story's ending, but I do hope there is a Book 3...
For What Its Worth chapter 39 . 4/10/2007
So Kiv still gets to terrorise people in jail? Good for him. But who was the man in the black suit? Is that Nevrian dude persisting in his interest? I would like to know more about Xienna as well. Background information on many of the characters is sorely lacking...
Moonlite Star chapter 39 . 4/3/2007
Ah, Xienna. Can't say I'm too surprised. She was really the only person it could have been, in my mind - the only person that made sense. I would have totally stuck Kez there too, heh. It would certainly make her break more interesting, and the interactions between the two characters are just...too unique to write to pass up such an opportunity.

I'm starting to see some hope for Kiv now too. Don't crush that...

Update soon! :D I really enjoyed this chapter!
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