|Reviews for An Attempt at Normalcy|
| kris bartolome chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
short, but the way you tell the story is mesmerizing. in that one page, you let me feel for jay. this is great stuff.
| life like whoa chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
A nice start, I hope I can look forward to an update.
(oh and yeah like foodaddict said, I don't know if you were planning on adding about the main character in later chapters but I'd like to know alittle more about him.)
| foodaddict chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
This seems too close to a certain reality for comfort, but I like how you write. :D I was hoping it'd be longer though-hehe-a little more something on the main character. :D I feel like you were trying to tell us something with his name being an attempt at normalcy...I think if you fleshed things out it'd be easier to see. Nonetheless, looking forward to an update. :D
| reality-forsaken chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
I want to read MORE!