|Reviews for Break Down|
| Thenardier chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I just read through all your haikus. I love how everything feels so real. It also brings a new perspective to life. Great job.
| Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Aw, so sad. And such a great image, corresponding to your pen name as well. Great haiku.
| R-Vega-X chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Funky. I like this alot.
| kit feral chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Ooh, I like this. It's so pretty! And I love the formatting. Especially the "pull" it just made it really really cool. And I adore the last line. Awesome work, keep it up!