Reviews for Both
Mike chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
I love it...what made you write it?
tortietoby chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
I really like this! It's just the right length as well :) Keep writing!
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
There's something rare about this. I loved how you mentioned traffic and hoodies, so it wasn't overly whimsical. The ending is very strong. Good work