|Reviews for Cute Face|
| poet tree chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
last two lines hellishly wonderful.
| hmm something chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
'so i ran away by standing still' stood out for me more so than all the bold-faced and italicized lines. I think it might be my favourite line of them all.
Nice poem - I can't decide if it's bitterly angry or bitterly melancholy, with a touch of anger. Besides which, you've at least succeeded in phrasing your lines so that it conveys certain emotions well, instead of just blankly saying/stating whatever. But critic and / or expert I am not. (Not even close. 3)
| just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
i LOVE this stanza:'i can hear you whisperingat me in the lightwhere you blind meso i can see no more thanyour silhouette'just...wow. beautiful.