last two lines hellishly wonderful.

'so i ran away by standing still' stood out for me more so than all the bold-faced and italicized lines. I think it might be my favourite line of them all.

Nice poem - I can't decide if it's bitterly angry or bitterly melancholy, with a touch of anger. Besides which, you've at least succeeded in phrasing your lines so that it conveys certain emotions well, instead of just blankly saying/stating whatever. But critic and / or expert I am not. (Not even close. 3)

i LOVE this stanza:'i can hear you whisperingat me in the lightwhere you blind meso i can see no more thanyour silhouette'just...wow. beautiful.