Jesus you're good with imagery. "so he stayed not perfect/willed away life/and hung by a rope/from his mistress's rafters" xx

I liked the poem overall - the story it tells and then the final line 'just like the rest of us' just tied it all in so ... wonderfully.

Favourited.

I liked at the end how the focus shifted from the guy to...everyone else. Like the story you are telling isnt just his, but everyones. Really good.