|Reviews for Will Away This|
| Everworld chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Jesus you're good with imagery. "so he stayed not perfect/willed away life/and hung by a rope/from his mistress's rafters" xx
| hmm something chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
I liked the poem overall - the story it tells and then the final line 'just like the rest of us' just tied it all in so ... wonderfully.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
I liked at the end how the focus shifted from the guy to...everyone else. Like the story you are telling isnt just his, but everyones. Really good.