Reviews for Will Away This |
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![]() ![]() Jesus you're good with imagery. "so he stayed not perfect/willed away life/and hung by a rope/from his mistress's rafters" xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the poem overall - the story it tells and then the final line 'just like the rest of us' just tied it all in so ... wonderfully. Favourited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked at the end how the focus shifted from the guy to...everyone else. Like the story you are telling isnt just his, but everyones. Really good. |