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Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
not pathetic... realistic. Great work, yeah the ending wasn't so great but the rest was. chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Very powerful..I can somewhat relate to this..
by His blood chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
you're not pathetic.

trust me. you're not.

you're amazing, & so is your writing, &... so what if you still can't get over her? i despise her for what she's done to you. the way she's broken you & made you feel this way. the only good thing i can think of is that at least it made you write all this brilliant poetry. but i just wish you didn't have to feel this... i really wish i could just kill her for doing this to you but i can't.

all i can do is let you know just how amazing this is. i love your writing, it's so amazing... you're worth more than she ever will be. trust me.
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
The ending was fine. This was awesome. I loevd the advanced methaphorical stuff in this-it was really cool, and well told. WOD