Reviews for metaphors & similes
a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
wow. i dont know what to say anymore. but i read. and i liked.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
these metaphors and similies are awesome.. amazingly done
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
my grape soda fender.

man, jeremy is getting some serious exposure. fabulous K. bense, it's been a pleasure.
in theory chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
That whole line dedicated to "we" just spoke to me, the structure of it is so visual and mm.

Nie work.
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
love the imagery- comparisons of the two, apart and together. love how you find poetry in the small mundane things.
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Beautiful. So much wonderful imagery.