|Reviews for your scissors on my dotted lines|
| Talyth chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
This is just really, really cool.
| eden is burning chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
This was a fabulous poem, but I can't help but recognise the line(s)
"i'm just the onewith sharpie poetry on her jeans"
Beautifully phrased and used, but reminds me SO MUCH of Elise in Jodi Picoult's 'Vanishing Acts.' Have you read it? Great book.
And wonderful poem.
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| Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
"i'm just your little emo girl".. i loved how blatant and honest it was. those last two lines i hear as a whisper, almost threatening...
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
love this one. it's got that little somthing to it.
| GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Wonderful, i love this line "But the love lines are outof style right? I'm just your little emo girl, i'm just the one with sharpie poetry on her jeans"I can't help but , beautiful
| HatredsGirl chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
That is so beautiful...
| lastchance02 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
this is really pretty. How cold and elegant.
| the Rin chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Love it. As always. The scissor metaphor makes me happy.
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| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
this is so sexy, flitrting, brilliant-no words. love, love that; "burn for me, won't you?" i just giggled finding that line terribly amusing, the last line too is quite good too. it is painful, dark & sort-of erotic, you twist it and molded it into what is now. & that is fabulous.
[man...i am so behind in my reviews. sorry.]
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Holy SHIT! I love this!
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Sexy flirting with danger. A lovely combination. I love the seductiveness of 'burn for me, won't you?'. And the ending is wonderfully satisfying.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
god, it's beautiful. the feeling of lack of safety makes me feel shitty inside.
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Nice job with the imagery here; good stuff.
| primal injection chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
This was glorious. Short but intellegent and really # beautiful.
| poet tree chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
i can't quite say a favorite part because all of it is my favorite part.