|Reviews for your scissors on my dotted lines|
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
tragic, like it was made just for these words.
"burn for me, won't you?" it signifies so much.
| notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
"with sharpie poetry on her jeans" ha.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
this is where i am right now. beautiful & painful, starts out sort-of erotic, dark, you think you know hwat's going ot happen, and then you twist it. i love it.
| AnAlterEgoName chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
seems a little step by i adore the last line.
oh, oh. sharpie poetry
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Very beautiful. My favourite line was 'but love lines are out of style, right?' Good work
| rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
this is clever and brilliant.. good job!