|Reviews for Shattered Over Ground|
| Woggs chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
I think this is my favorite out of the three poems I've read so far. The lines in parentheses really add that extra "oomph" to the overall feel.
Although I must confess I'm not sure exactly what you meant by the last line. It seems to contradict the sentiment that the rest of the poem is setting up.
| Ghostwriter Revealed chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Ouch... I'm sorry. Anyway, I like the formating of it. Although i wish it were a longer read.