Reviews for Shattered Over Ground
Woggs chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
I think this is my favorite out of the three poems I've read so far. The lines in parentheses really add that extra "oomph" to the overall feel.

Although I must confess I'm not sure exactly what you meant by the last line. It seems to contradict the sentiment that the rest of the poem is setting up.
Ghostwriter Revealed chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Ouch... I'm sorry. Anyway, I like the formating of it. Although i wish it were a longer read.