Reviews for Not Tonight
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
I really love this piece! It's gorgeous and heartfelt and painfully real. Beautiful job.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
oh, very nice... i particularly liked the stanzas in italics, they were most powerful. great poem :D
Sweet Persephone chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Awesome work.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Hmm...I love how you made the female, or the victim, the 'hero' for the day. I like the way you described the emotions that were running through the victim and the way she escapes. Pure excellence.
Ghostwriter Revealed chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Wow. I enjoyed that one. God forbid if this was a real experience. If so, then I'm glad you prevailed but sorry that it happened. If it wasn't a real experince then I say, you have one heck of an imagination.