|Reviews for Nuclear Ferocity|
| back row dancer chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Dont give up, wait for it... wait for it...
I like how this flows. It keeps you reading and isnt boring. Good job.
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Once again amazing metaphors, language and imagery. There was one part in this that really stood out to me -
"They say I'm so talented,why then am I batting .0for the season of love?Why, When I'm so "loveable"do all my relationships fail likeNapoleon at Waterloo?"
You protray powerful emotions in your poetry.
Take care and keep writing,EB
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
The baseball references contribute well to the overall concept here. The emotion is evident, and the self-exploration that comes out helps the ending seem somewhat realistic. A well written work, because it thrusts so much together and wraps it all together well.
| Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
great similes. more woe, i see. hope things work out (not being sarcastic for once).