Reviews for Coming to Take You Home
Doc Blood chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I like this. I'm addicted to haiku and this requires putting an emotion or thought into a very short form. The line in parentheses reminds me of what I want for my own epitaph - "I wasn't ready yet!"
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
oh wow i like what u've done with such few words! it almost like a haiku. great job!