Reviews for Without You
sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
This is wonderful, I love the imagery and the whole flow of it.
iglooey chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Wow, awesome poem. i love the last line, it really takes your breath away. Great symbolism. I didn't really get this line: "Though life in me." It seems kind of out of place. Amazing job though and keep on writing.
Candy T chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
wow, biene, i love your poetry! it's so sad.. it reminds me of rifat *sigh*...
HauntedHeart chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
I really like this poem, it's fresh and lamenting, yet sad and almost regretful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
sad and beautiful.. i can completely relate.. amazing job
wildinside chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
thanks for the review.. anyways... i Like this... its extremely short but you catch that the speaker is said and distraught about something... She wants this guy and he doesnt want her anymore? good job
Johana chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I love your word choice here. It's very lovely. I like the lines "Holding to my bosom, a single picture of you" because I do that too (long-distance relationship), but I won't lose it all (to the wind). I'm going to keep holding on.

Thanks for the nice poem :)