|Reviews for Without You|
| sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
This is wonderful, I love the imagery and the whole flow of it.
| iglooey chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Wow, awesome poem. i love the last line, it really takes your breath away. Great symbolism. I didn't really get this line: "Though life in me." It seems kind of out of place. Amazing job though and keep on writing.
| Candy T chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
wow, biene, i love your poetry! it's so sad.. it reminds me of rifat *sigh*...
| HauntedHeart chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
I really like this poem, it's fresh and lamenting, yet sad and almost regretful.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
sad and beautiful.. i can completely relate.. amazing job
| wildinside chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
thanks for the review.. anyways... i Like this... its extremely short but you catch that the speaker is said and distraught about something... She wants this guy and he doesnt want her anymore? good job
| Johana chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I love your word choice here. It's very lovely. I like the lines "Holding to my bosom, a single picture of you" because I do that too (long-distance relationship), but I won't lose it all (to the wind). I'm going to keep holding on.
Thanks for the nice poem :)