Reviews for Waiting for You
theory of black chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
hehe, that's the only way I ever communicate with my boyfriend... I think he's allergic to the phone. Anyway, aside from the last comment, I love this poem because I could see it in my mind as it was happening. It reminds me of what I do a lot... wait. Anyway, great job.
Peter Harrison chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
I really enjoy this poem actually, I like how the time seems to slow down, your thoughts become more condensed into a short time frame, it's excellent. Well written, good use of rhythm too. Good job!
Avameris chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Lovely, again. This more than meets the high standards I have come to expect from your work. 9:31, how ironic.
bittersweet suicide chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
wow that sux. the fact that he came online at 9:31
writerforever chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Wow, great poem!I love this cause I can totally relate. Me and my bf share a long distance relationship too. But he's moving up here where I live which is great :).Anyways, love the poem!
Herminia chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
This is very emotional. I like your use of the time at the beginning of each stanza. Good job.
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
keep your day job
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Good good stuff. I liked the sound of it, the rhythm and the diction and everything like that.