nice rhyming... i like it a lot... well done and it describes all of us

Very spiffy poem! It said so much with so many different possible meanings with just three lines! Amazing job! Made me think! Keep it up!

This isn't actually too bad. Not to sure about the bold and italic use in it though, it makes it hard to read. Well for me anyway. Get rid of that and you have a nice short poem well done _