Reviews for Kindred
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Short yet so meaningful. Absolutely beautiful, I love the message and the language. Great poem.
Johana chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
This is a lovely short piece. I once had a discussion with my boyfriend that was similar to this. (hehehe) I would have liked to see more, but alas, there is none.

Good job
R-Vega-X chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Seems a little too short for me, but that's just my opinion. Like Faithless Juliet said: Good start, but ends suddenly and makes it unsolid.

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I like it, the detail grabs at you and haunts you (the image of the same core really struck me) the only thing that bothered me is that I felt that rather then ending it just stopped - like maybe you didn’t know what to do with it next. I think you have an amazing start with this but there’s nothing that makes it solid for me.

just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
i love the format, lovely work. you've picked out the right words in italics and bold. great job!