Reviews for Blood filled snow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thats awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to admit I didn't see that coming. I thought you know happiley ever after and all that mushy I love betrayal and death(and faking death).Well you pulled one on me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is hilarious, especially the part about the "torture" I nearly spit my strawberry milk all over my computer when I read that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this was really good. a very great idea. and it ended rather unexpectedly. nice work. keep it up. ~Phoenixblood |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I was reading through ch 16 and saw lanbergene...do you mean the expensive type of Italian car lambourghini? Just thought I would ask. L. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good intentions, right? You clearly have a story but your grammar is killing it, invest your time in editing and I think you'll like the results. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. never expected that to happen. lol. great comeback though. i was wondering when you were going to get back to this story. keep updating, i want to know more. ~Phoenixblood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() stop giving us cliff hangers! Just need to work more on profreading more. But another great chapter, Helena! your faithful reveiwer, w.w. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm sad... i didn't get to read this before it was posted... oh, well... probably my own fault since i hardly get to check my mail... sorry to hear about your 'puter... that always sucks... i haven't had the chance to read this chappie but i promise i'll read it later and give you kudos! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story. i like it. keep it up and can't wait for more.~Phoenixblood |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw.. i really like it *hugs* thanks for writing the story, but now you have to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH update SON! |
![]() ![]() OMG! THSI STORY'S AWESOME! PLZ CONTINUE WRITING! -Stacey |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed that in earlier chapters you left out puctuation marks and other mistakes but I see it got better. I really like this story and i can't wait for more and could u R&R some of my stories and poems pleez. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! lol, this is great! i just started reading it today tho, cause i read the first chappie months ago, but havent gotten back on fp for a while, but this is great! and update soon, or feel the wrath of all that is me, lol j/k |