Reviews for starlight:stardust
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
wow, i love how you infused astronomy with love...this is just so packed with lines and lines of enchanting poetry...although i don't know, but i feel a bit claustrophobic when i read this...still, a very good job...

truly yours...
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
What kind of a review can I write for this work of art? It left me speechless...every word fits perfectly into the ensemble, every idea is deeply moving, every verse is a masterpiece for itself...bloody amazing! Love, Mia
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
So desperate and full of conflict. Don't know what to say aside from 'this just says everything.'Beautious.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
When Titans struggled to discern,—Chaos,

With her yawning blackness swallowed them all,

It's only lately light has come again,

So fusion's burning could create worlds,

Where heart could whirl in adulating awe,

At distances and places far beyond,

Expanding at a pace brain can't conceive,

And where love seems a passing shooting star,

With impact piercing to volcanic core,

Eruptions covering clear atmosphere,

'Til winter's cold covers all Eden's green,

And refuge we could find in dark deep caves,

Awaiting that fair era when sun's rays,

Would melt iced oceans back into their place,

Allowing us to once again frolic,

In waters full of turquoise and gold fish,

Until another cataclysm chance,

Clear soul devastates with impact forceful.

p.s. I like your mix of astrophysics and the heart. m
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
now this is poetry. i love the way difference between the first and second stanza. mazing.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Breathtaking. just breathtaking
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
beautiful work. i just love the tone in this piece. great job!