Reviews for You
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
caralene chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Ah! Love the poem!;-)
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
not bad. i liked when you wrote that he didnt' love you but you loved him and it worked out. i need that reassurance sometimes. it's hard to love someone so much and to know that they don't love you...great job.
MichelleMagly chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Pretty good for a first poem. For strange reasons, first poems are almost always the best poems and I know what you mean by all this. I used to love some guy but then thought, "Why?" (rhyme!) Anyways, keep up the good writing. You have a lot of potential as a poet.